Assignment 1: Evaluation

The target audience for this voice piece is young adults who drive.They relate to these people because they are written and read in an informal way which is appealing to the age range. The story I used relates to the target audience because it is something that will be effecting them.

I added a slight audio in the background as it gave the bulletin something else, I then decided on taking the audio out as I felt the story was too serious. 

I chose a story about drink drivers at Christmas as this is relevant to the target audience as they are more likely to be pressured into driving under the influence. 

Finding people to take the vox pop seriously was difficult as they were all younger people I was targeting.

We followed the conventions of news so a script, voice piece and TX details were also all included. We made sure that these were included so that the bulletin would flow nicely and seem more real.

If I had a chance to do the project again I would have changed the target audience as I feel an older audience would have given a more serious answer and not have been so reluctant to answer questions on drink driving.